Story-Telling: Thrid & Fourth Draft

After reviewing my second draft I have decided to make some more edits and move onto my third and fourth drafts. For these drafts I have made a few minor changes. I have rewritten my opening scene and changed some of my characters dialogue. Finally I re-wrote my final sequence. Overall most of the changes were made because I wanted to use my car accident more throughout the whole script.

Soon I will have a script feedback session with Steve Combs, who is a professional script writer. After this session I will be able to start writing my fifth draft.

Draft 3 Title Page