Friday 24 November 2017

Professional Pre-Production: Genre Change: Mockumentary to Comedy

Whilst working on certain elements of the show, I have decided that the mockumentary genre is not the right fit.

GENRE CHANGE: MOCKUMENTARY TO COMEDY

What is Comedy (in reference to television)?


According to the Oxford English Dictionary, comedy is 'professional entertainment consisting of jokes and sketches, intended to make an audience laugh'. In terms of genre, it's defined as the 'style or genre represented by comedy films, plays, and broadcast programmes'. So basically the jist of it is that whatever you claim is a comedy, must be funny and entertaining. I believe Pleasure Park fits into this category as it is a humourous take on the world of the amusement park.

Comedy, like most things, originates from Ancient Greece. It was originally used as a term to describe stage plays that had happy endings. Aristotle himself once said that comedy is an imitation of men worse than average. To this day it is still true that your typical comedy characters are not like your average man or woman, and it's often this difference that makes them humourous.

It has also been said that the early Greek comedy plays influenced what we now call satire, which is different to comedy. Pleasure Park can also been seen as a form of satire as it is using humour to exaggerate the world of amusement parks, by criticising the types of characters you might find in that type of workplace.

In terms of television, comedy has always played a part. Television is a form of entertainment, and comedy is entertaining, hence why it's always been present. Over the year different types of comedy programme have come about like comedy drama (or dramedy), comedy romance (or rom-com), and even zombie comedy romance (or zom-rom-com). As well as this, my original choice of genre, mockumentary, came about as a branch of the comedy genre.


Why Comedy Instead of Mockumentary?

- The direction I wanted the show to go in fits better with the comedy genre than it does with the mockumentary genre.
- I feel the mockumentary genre limited what I could do with the show, how I could style it, how I could brand it, and who I could cast in it.
- By changing to a generic comedy programme, I can keep a majority of the cast members I originally wanted. I can also now keep the style of branding I wanted.
- Overall I feel the show will work better as a normal comedy, than as a mockumentary.

Sky One champion their original comedy productions, and so a comedy like this will fit into their schedule nicely, better than a mockumentary would.

Similar comedy programmes

Other similar comedy programmes have been produced in the past, these are:

- The Office UK/US
- Trollied
- Modern Family
- Benidorm
- The Inbetweeners
- And in terms of film, Adventureland

I will carry out contextual research on these programmes to help aide the continued development of Pleasure Park.

Professional Pre-Production: Cast Developments

Initial feedback on my casting was that my choices were not right for the type of show I was creating. In response to this feedback, and after my reduction in character numbers, I have recast the show. I also plan to change the genre of the show so I can keep some of my original cast members, amongst other reasons.

CAST DEVELOPMENTS

Frank 'Mr Pleasure' Diamond: John Challis

Known for:

- Only Fools & Horses
- The Green Green Grass
- Benidorm


Chosen to play this character because he has played similar businessman roles in the past in other comedy programmes. Fits the look of the character.


Agent: https://mn2s.com/booking-agency/talent-roster/john-challis/ 



Debbie 'Mrs Pleasure' Diamond: Josie Kidd

Known for:

- Bounty Hunter
- The Crown
- Call The Midwife


Chosen to play this character because she has appeared in sky comedies before, and fits the look and age of the character.


Agent: http://www.sainou.com/josie-kidd/




Ned Parker: Simon Bird

Known for:

- The Inbertweeners
- Friday Night Dinner


Chosen to play this character because he has played a similar underdog, dorky character in other comedy programmes.


Agent: http://www.theartistspartnership.co.uk/bird/806/






Jimmy (Jim/James) Reynolds: Clive Rowe

Known for:

- Tracey Beaker
- Doctor Who
- So Awkward


Chosen because he is not too well known, and he fits the look and age of the character.


Agent: http://www.unitedagents.co.uk/clive-rowe





Daniel Waterhouse: Tom Rosenthal

Known for:

- Friday Night Dinner
- Plebs


Chosen because he has played similar socially awkward characters in other comedy programmes.


Agent: http://www.unitedagents.co.uk/tom-rosenthal






Emily Roberts: Nikki Runeckles

Known for:

- Bad Eduction


Chosen because she is not too well known, and in the one show she is known for, she played a similar character.


Agent: Unknown







Katie Smith: Jessica Knappett

Known for:

- Drifters
- How Not To Live Your Life


Chosen because she is not too well known, and fits the look and age of the character.


Agent: http://www.unitedagents.co.uk/jessica-knappett






Jake Evans: Ryan Sampson

Known for:

- Plebs
- After You've Gone


Chosen because he is not too well known, and fits the age and look of the character.


Agent: http://www.unitedagents.co.uk/ryan-sampson






Harry Clarke: Jonathan Sayer

Known for:

- The Play That Goes Wrong
- Peter Pan Goes Wrong


Chosen because he fits the character, but also because he is a theatre actor, probably looking for his first break into television.


Agent: http://www.unitedagents.co.uk/jonathan-sayer





'Reggie': Marek Larwood

Known for:

- Sorry, I've Got No Head
- Celebability


Chosen because he is not well known and he fits the look and age of the character.


Agent: http://www.mareklarwood.com/contact-agent






Alfie & Zoe: Alfie Deyes & Zoe Sugg

Known for:

- Being popular vloggers on YouTube


Chosen because their role in the story required them to be famous British online stars, which they are.


Agent: https://www.gleamfutures.com/ 







These people will probably be my final cast for Pleasure Park. I feel they all fit the characters they have been chosen to play quite well, and I can see them being in the show, and in real life being up for taking part.

Tuesday 14 November 2017

Professional Pre-Production: Character Developments

Following on from my greenlight pitch feedback, I have updated the character profiles for Pleasure Park.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENTS

The heaviest bit of feedback I received about my characters was that the female characters didn't seem to have good purpose. They all fancied men, or relied on men. This was not my intention, and I didn't even realise that was the case until it was brought to my attention. I wanted to ensure this was no longer the case, and so I have re-written all of my female characters.

As well as this I have re-written small details about each of the other characters. These are the changes I have made:

- It has been made more clear that Frank is determined to keep the park open, and he will do anything for the park.
- Ned now has a love of theme parks which he is not afraid to show. He knows everything there is to know about theme parks. I've added this detail, one because it fits with the real life person this character is based on, but also because it gives other characters something to be irritated about.
- Jimmy is now an old friend of Fransk. They met during the time at Pleasure Park that Jimmy calls 'the good old days'.
- Daniel is also socially awkward. This helps you as the audience understand more why he struggles to fit in at first.
- Emily is now a much tougher character. The rumours about her have been scrapped from the storyline and she now has a bit of a dirty mind, something which further attracts Daniel.
- To help reduce my character numbers I have also cut the following characters: Sara Green, Sophie Smith, Oscar Wood, Lucy Taylor, & Freddie White. I have cut these characters as I feel they did not add anything to the storyline of the first series, however they could appear in future series if the show developed.
- Finally, using a good idea from my tutor, the 'professional' filmmakers are now two YouTube celebrities who will play themselves in the show. I think this will make for a good cameo, and also work well for the storyline.

With these changes made, these are the updated character profiles:

MAIN CHARACTERS

Frank 'Mr Pleasure' Diamond

Frank is the boss at Pleasure Park. He has an awesome Magnum P.I. moustache. He is determined to do anything to keep the park open.

Debbie 'Mrs Pleasure' Diamond

Debbie is Franks wife. They've been married for 15 years, and they met during the early days of Pleasure Park when they both worked as ride operators. She is Head of Customer Service at Pleasure Park.

Ned Parker

Ned Parker is the Health and Safety Manager at Pleasure Park. He irritates everyone because he is so uptight about everything H&S. He also knows everything there is to know about theme parks, and he is not afraid to show it.

Jimmy (Jim/James) Reynolds

Jimmy is the wisest ride operator at Pleasure Park. He thinks he knows better than Frank, and wants to take over as manager. He's known Frank for a very long time, as they both work as ride ops in what Jimmy refers to as 'the good old days'.

Daniel Waterhouse

Daniel is new to Pleasure Park. This is his first season as a ride operator. He has a lot to learn. He's a bit socially awkward.

Emily Roberts

Emily doesn't take crap from anyone. Most of the guys have a crush on her, including newbie Daniel, but none of them ever try to get to know her. She has a great sense of humour, and a bit of a dirty mind at times. She is a ride operator at Pleasure Park.

SIDE CHARACTERS

Katie Smith

Katie likes the colour black. Black hair, black clothes, black lipstick, she's got it all. Like Emily, she doesn't take crap from anyone. She and Emily are good friends. She is a ride operator.

Jake Evans

Jake is a bully. He's not nice to everyone just because he thinks it's funny. He loves to pick on a newbie, so Daniel quickly becomes his victim. He's a ride operator.

Harry Clarke

Harry isn't the most popular person. He's a bit of a weird guy, and it puts people off. He likes comic books and cosplay. Him and newbie Daniel become good friends right away as Daniel finds it easy to talk to him. Harry is a ride op.

REGULAR APPERANCES

'Reggie'

Nobody knows a lot about creepy Reggie. He visits the park almost every day to see all the staff. He especially likes talking to Katie, which she doesn't like. He's desperate to stop his favourite place from being closed down.

ONE OFF APPERANCES

Alfie & Zoe

Alfie Deyes and Zoe Sugg are real life YouTube stars, who in the show will play not so good YouTube stars who are hired by Frank to produce a brand new advert for the park, in the hopes that it will go viral online. Surprise, surprise, it doesn't go well.

These are the current character profiles. I will now use these to create new synopses for each episode of the show.