Directions: Fine Cut Feedback

After taking on all the feedback from the rough cut viewing, I put together a fine cut of my Drama and Self-Portrait, and showed them to Simon for some final feedback:

DRAMA

• Adjust one of the shots when Gus is looking in Walt's direction as the head movement between the two shots does not match.
• Change the point at which the bomb is revealed, as it is currently comes in too early.
• Apart from those small changes, everything else is fine.

SELF-PORTRAIT

• No changes need to be made.
• The sound design is very good.

CHANGES TO MAKE

• Adjust the cutting point on the shots of Gus looking around, so the head movement is the same in both shots.
• Move the reveal of the bomb further down the timeline.