Before receiving feedback on our seventh script draft we have written an eighth script draft.
SCRIPT DRAFT 8
Changes to the script include:
- We've swapped the first two lines around so Bobbie speaks first. We wanted the first line of the film to really make the audience think about what is going on. By having Bobbie say 'is this the place?" at the beginning of the film the audience are instantly thrown into a situation where they have no idea what is actually going on. This will help keep them hooked.
That was the only change. We will continue to make changes after we receive feedback on this draft.
SHOOTING SCRIPT DRAFT 2
Using this new script draft I created a new shooting script.
This new shooting script is very similar to the last one, but the location in the script of some of the shots has changed. I have also had to add in some new shots to ensure I have coverage for all of the new scenes we have added. As with the last shooting script, this will help me create a new shot list, and will come in handy during the editing process.
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