Once the rough cut was ready, we sat down as a group with Helen to get some feedback.
ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK FROM THE GROUP
Prior to the meeting, we sat down without Helen and watched the rough cut through a few times to identify any issues, this was the feedback:
- Fix one of the social media logos during the news package, as it blends into the background too much.
- Add in a new hashtag during the bottle flip segment in front of the green screen.
- Add the YouTuber Fred to the replay of the live, as I mention his name in that part of the script.
- Replace the shots of me holding a pineapple, with clips from the original pineapple pen video.
- Add a slow motion replay in during the live segment.
- Fix a few colour issues.
After our initial meeting, we sat down with Helen to receive some feedback:
- Helen felt the interview with Katie slowed down the pace and energy of our video, we agreed. She suggested that we mess around with the interview and make it a bit silly or energetic. Unfortunately, during the interview, I only stuck to the pre-written questions, and this adds to the reduction in energy.
- A few shots need to be colour corrected as they either do not match, or do not look true to real life.
- Add in a few graphic during the live segment to help explain the aim of the challenge. Also look at maybe adding some additional sound effects to bring up the energy levels.
We will now work on this feedback by:
- Nisserin will work on colour correcting the footage as she has a better eye for it than me.
- I will add #flippidyflip to the bottle flip green screen segment, as it references something George says on screen.
- I will replace the pineapple shot, and fix the social media logo by changing it's colour scheme so it doesn't blend in.
- We will work on the Fred shot as a group to perfect it.
- I will add a slow motion replay of a bottle flip to the live challenge.
- We will watch the interview back, and think about how we can improve its energy levels.
- And finally I will add those additional graphics to the live segment.
Apart from those changes, everything else is fine.
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